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The setup of your blog looks great... There is a lot of text to go over with a good amount of visuals. However, adding more pictures and video's might create more of a visual for the reader to get a quicker sense of understanding. Good entertainment, well thought out information and shows a sense of concern. Good Job.
ReplyDeleteOverall I enjoyed the Blog and learned some new interesting information, I was thus informed. I was somewhat persuaded into thinking about other unconventional methods of transportation, bathing, and waste removal. It is intriguing how we fail to change our ways, due to influence from the industries that would inevitably have to change as a result of this new "unconventional method". I was entertained as well due to the fact that i wanted to read the whole Blog quickly. I think the narration that tied everything together must have given this appeal.
ReplyDeleteI think you guys integrated media into your piece appropriately. I liked that you almost let for the pictures and video speak for themselves with only a brief description.
I felt the writing was well done and flowed nicely, I did not find much room for improvement as a whole.
This section is great as well, but some of the pictures at the bottom could use some explanation. The dymaxian map is cool looking, but what does it mean? Other than that, maybe a little more on why we don't implement these ideas would be good. Good job!
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